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in book 1 |  
 
 
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Crosthwaite's Marginal Notes in Clarke 
1787 book 2 
   
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p.55 para.4 
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On the 23d of June ... 
  
    To be serious; I cannot contradict 
this Paragraph, as many People saw as is here mentioned, or 
nearly so. 
  
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p.57 para.1 
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This rivulet ... 
  
    not one Gust of wind Mr. Author, I 
was in this heavy Rain there was indeed much Thunder & 
an uncommon sound in the Air, which prevented me from 
Sleeping. 
  
    Hail first; & the Rain in St. 
Johns began before Ten 
  
    this is a great height 
  
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p.58 top 
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this was only the secondary use ...  
  
    A very wilfull mistake Mr, Author; I 
am not yet 54 years old, & have seen a fine old Tower 
there; with Loop holes, & a good Ditch which I believe 
went Quite round it!!! 
  
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p.62 para.2 
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It is amazing how ... 
  
    A Rude Author too; as all those 
Stones appear to be very natives of the Spot! 
  
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p.63 para.4 
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The road to the Lake ... 
  
    Neither the Living nor the Dead ever 
made this walk, because it was Impossible!!! 
  
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p.69 top 
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This Lake of Derwentwater ... 
  
    Crosthwaite makes Derwen[ ] 1365 
Acres 
  
    Here our new Author makes all the 
Islands on Derwent about 13 Acres, & at the same time 
has made Lord[ ] Island to measure 25 Acres in his Map of 
Derwen[ ] & thus he has blasted both his credit as a 
Lake Surve[ ]or & Land Surveyor. He has also made all 
the Islands together above 60 Acres & given no one of 
them either their prop[ ] place, or size, or form! He has 
for instance ma[ ] Rampsholm 6 times larger than it ought to 
be, & laid it length way[ ] across the Water the very 
reverse of its rea[ ] direction & Otter Isl[a ] is made 
about 50 times larger than it sho[ ] be with the coasts of [ 
] Lake no better Execut[ ] In short our Pompous Author has 
Disguis[ ] Poor old Derwent & Likewise the Lake o[ ] 
Bassenthwaite to all intents & purpose[ ] as will 
plainly appea[ ] from any high Emin[ ] near them; The North 
[&] South line in Derwent [ ] wrong by 25 Degrees & 
Bassenthwaite by 90! & His other two Lakes are fare from 
Accu[ ] nor are the Maps of Ro[ ] & Country better, 
there being many confounded Errors. The Maps likewise are 
taken from 6 different Scales which is no credi[ ] to the 
Surveyor, as by t[ ] means it is difficult to Judge what 
proportio[ ] one Lake bears to anoth[ ] 
  
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p.69 para.4 
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Since so many ... 
  
    This should have no credit Paid to 
it 
  
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p.69 para.5 
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A country wench ... 
  
    It is believed this long dialogue 
was fabricated either by the Author; or His Editor who was 
much [the] Cuter hand; & of a very Waggish disposition 
withall. 
  
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p.71 para.5 
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This station of his ... 
  
    say not so Mr, Author or you will 
get the name of blind Guide! Mr. West's Station here is a 
very good one, & not 200, Yards above the roa[ ] 
  
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p.75 para.2 
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Borrowdale, till within ... 
  
    This is a most unjust, & wicked 
little Paragraph 
  
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p.75 para.3 
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Not above twennty years ago ... 
  
    O' Barberous Author! of those very 
People has thou been asking Charity! 
  
    unheard of before this Ignorant 
Rusticks Book cam out. 
  
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p.75 para.5 
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One story, that shews ... 
  
    If ever such a thing happened it was 
before the days of our Authors Grandum 
  
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p.75 para.6 
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The People of Borrowdale ... 
  
    The People of Borrowdale, have lived 
to see this Deceitful Author walled in compleatly, & 
covered over at top, on account of this very Book 
  
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p.75 foot 
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regarding the whole page 
  
    Mr, Grays description of the People 
of Borrowdale, was just the Reverse of this above ungenerous 
Page 
  
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p.76 para.1 
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I SEND te thisan ... 
  
    Here our Author & his man Friday 
The Editor, have taken much pains to little purpose, as few 
People will be able to understand them. 
  
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p.82 top 
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in sheets of foam ... 
  
    neither 200 Feet high, nor much 
inclined to Leave the Rock 
  
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p.82 para.4 
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Many travellers go to see ... 
  
    21 Yards in length 
  
    it is no se[ ] stone, but a pa[ ] of 
the Rock tumbled [in] 
  
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p.82 para.6 
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This species of mundie ... 
  
    It is neither mundie, nor marcasite 
  
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p.84 para.6 
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Before we leave the Lake ... 
  
    Wrong again! at such times the Swell 
beats against every shore. 
  
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p.84 para.8 
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Some of the curious ... 
  
    no deserts u[ ] this road; n[ ] 
storms more than ordin[ ] 
  
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